Nicely done. Nothing wrong with the mix....it sounds good.

What I'd suggest, or maybe just something to think about, is condensing your projects down to under 4 minutes.... between 3 to 4 minutes. Without vocals, you really have to have interesting musical things going on to keep the listener interested. There's a lot of "space" in there that could be edited out to shorten it by half and still have a really nice instrumental. To me, the song really didn't start until about the 1:30 point when the really nice piano part started. You could have simply started with the piano after a very short.... 2 to 4 bars of intro....

Still good, but long.

Last edited by Guitarhacker; 04/15/25 07:30 AM.

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