Hi David,

I'm glad you joined us with a new song. At first: the vocals of the lead singer are very good.
I can understand that some, like Ron, said you got them from the intro.
You got me there too.
The vocal stayed nice together and I didn't hear (real) difficulties between both vocals.
Also the lyrics are very good, but that never was a problem for you.
But somewhere halfway through the song seems to lose its flow and it becomes difficult to continue.
Maybe a transposition can help you out there? Or maybe you're thinking, "What the heck are you talking about"

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130