James, lovely composition. That cello has SO much character. I didn't dislike your previous version whatsoever, but this is quite elegant. My only constructive thought is that there are some passages starting at about 1:50 where the cello volume completely washes over the piano. You can see these sections on the SoundCloud waveform. Doesn't detract from the power of the tune in the slightest though.


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
StudioCat DAW dual screen
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)