Hi Jim! A really good melodic and listenable song. It reminded me of the style of Jack Johnson - not sure if that was because of the singing style, lyrical theme, harmonies or genre - and a very good example of the music and lyrics being as one.

The line cliche I - Imaj7 - I7 - IV is the gift that keeps on giving, both in your song and in many others. It still sounds unique in your hands.

I looooove reggae and there is never enough of it going around. Great use of harmonies also - it would be good to hear from you to unpack why and how you used vocal harmonies in different parts of the song.
Andrew D


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