Hi Asom2me!
Love the melody, words and supporting chords to your song. I’ve noted your songs have a certain melancholy to them - at least the ones I’ve listened to. I’m not saying this is a bad thing. You also must a deep back catalogue of songs - glad for you that you are recording these so they are not lost.

I found the backing to be a heavy style for the song, and wonder how it would come up with a lighter style?

Regarding synth voices, isn’t it good that we live in an age when we can draw upon tech that can do what we can’t - or don’t want to. BIAB is a good example of this.

Andrew D


Regards,
Andrew D
Adelaide, Sth Aust
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