Hi, Beth.

Nice song - glad you got it finished. The lyrics are to the point, and I like the banjo on the intro.

My only thought is I'd like to have had the bridge more sparse - drums and that held guitar strum are all it needs to back up that vocal and give it focus. Move the really cool piano break at 2:32 at the end of the near 2:39 where it could stand alone with no other instruments playing, and then bring the chorus in with a bang. That's my feedback, worth half what you paid for it! wink

I enjoyed listening!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?