Hi Beth! I love the busyness of the bass and rhythm guitars contrasted with the longer notes of the vocal. I’ve listened to both versions and can see how your vocals have been made more prominent with good balance between lead and backing vocals. I’m not sure if I missed it on the original, but love the minor chord leading into the chorus - is it a minor iv? This is a great song and a good listen! I’m adding this to my SC playlist - will you put the new version on SC?

If you like the style of your song, it reminds me a song by a NZ band: ‘Northern Lights’ by Goldenhorse - different song but similar style.

Andrew D


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