Listening to the first version again, it's a really excellent song all around and your vocals are excellent, the only aspect of it I'm not keen on is the rhythm guitar in the left channel.
Oh! Now listening to the video and was surprised to find that choppy rhythm guitar again, though it does sound better in this version. The most noticeable difference is the production quality of the song and particularly your vocals. Just love the song all around.
But whaddaya doin' on YouTube? You'll have cookies chasing you now! crazy
I watched the "Strange Alchemy" video, too. Another first class song!


Some favourite Waoist Adages:
#1: Play on the Way.
#13: Ask not for whom the flower blooms, it blooms for you.
#58: Bring consciousness to it.
#63: On the road to effortlessness, effort must be made.
#92: Be Love Now, the rest will come on its own.