Hmh, from the title of the thread (beats and stuff suggest RAP) and your post I was expecting something more like Drake, and got something that sounds like Nu-Disco or so to me.
Leaves me a little disappointed.

But, reading through your post again, I think you have the right lingo, you could well be a rapper.
Lyrics have always been your greatest talent anyway.
So why not go one step further and turn it into a real rap song?
A kick sample and a preferably sub-sonic synthesizer bass sample and Autotune is all you need to give Drake a run for his money.
And don't worry about chords, one chord is more than enough for all the songs on your first album.
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