Hi Bob and Joliz! I think you really caught and represented this moment - like others where we are held in a position and given rare time to contemplate some of the deeper things in life. These times can almost be like a detox. Musically, the parts that supported this two minute reprieve so well were …
- the repetitive chord progression
- Joliz’s ahhh backing
- your nearly-spoken vocals

To me, the song felt like a calming balm. Well done!

Andrew D
PS I really appreciated the spelling of ‘grey’.


Regards,
Andrew D
Adelaide, Sth Aust
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