Originally Posted by BYOBand
I like this a lot, Andrew. There's a Bowie-esque, Who-esque quality.
Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Yep, as others have said, quite Bowie-esque.
Originally Posted by TuneMonger
And yes, a bit of Bowie in it. Well done.
Originally Posted by Floyd jane
Nice use of BIAB, Good vocals, Nicely mixed, Enjoyed the listen .fj
Originally Posted by BabuMusic
Wow, what a cool transition, Andrew. THANKS, Izzy, and well done, Andrew. I like the key change --it sets it off nicely.
Originally Posted by MarioD
Adding that chorus key change did the trick, it took a good song and made it a great song. I really liked this version
Originally Posted by Al-David
I didn't hear the original, but this sure sounds great! I have several songs in which I changed key for the chorus and/or bridge. It's pretty cool when it works - and it works perfectly here
Originally Posted by DC Ron
Well, I'll go with Bowie fronting Split Enz. Deliciously offbeat and undeniably cool. … I learn a lot from posters on this forum, too. They're a good bunch of folks.
Originally Posted by Ezekiel's Storm
I agree with BYOB that this is Bowie-esque, very much so. Well done!

Thank you everyone for your generous comments. Bowie with a dash of Split Enz? I'm not worthy, but they both had significant impact on my early listening years. As you hear more of my songs, you'll find I'm not averse to straying outside the diatonic. And thanks again to Izzy for his gentle nudge to do more, and wholeheartedly agree with DC Ron regarding this forum. I discovered it way too late.
Andrew D

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Andrew D
Adelaide, Sth Aust
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