STUNNING. You are one of the very best songwriters on here, without a shadow of a doubt.

Techie question smile : how did you make Saros II talk? There are a couple of places (especially, of course, towards the end) in which he talks, rather than sing.

Anyway:

What an achievement. Saros II is the perfect choice for this song, I might just have to put the money aside to purchase his voice, myself. But, for me, your lyrical writing and, it goes without saying, your musical writing ... in a class of their own, really. In addition: you really have a way of making me smile and forget about my day-to-day troubles, etc. . That's your trademark. No matter what you write, in which style, what it is about, etc. etc. etc. ... I leave, after listening to a song of yours, happy, smiling, and more capable of handling things in life.

I like to think that one can tell someone's personality by the kind of music they write. I may be totally wrong in correlating musical output to inner personality, mind you; but, in any case, your writing makes me think: ah, a good man wrote this. And THAT is a heck of an achievement, in itself.

I'll save the more "technical analysis" for another time, but I will say just one last thing:

Don't stop writing smile

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