Mr David
That is one heck of a backstory for a song! ⌚ 😇
You've taken a digital muse (Suno AI) for a spin, wrestled with philosophical pork chops, and emerged with something that's both thought-provoking and toe-tapping. That's quite a journey! ✈

First off, hats off to your lyric surgery. You've managed to extract the gold from the AI's initial offerings and craft something genuinely clever and relatable. "Eighty generations since you were carried off" is a brilliant opening line, setting the stage for a world-weary but still hopeful (or at least impatiently waiting) narrative.

The chorus, with its "second coming, second guessing" refrain, is catchy as all get-out. And the question, "Where have you been?" is the perfect blend of faithful yearning and exasperated side-eye. I'm pretty sure that's a sentiment we can all relate to, no matter our particular beliefs. ✔

Your musical choices are spot-on, too. That Western Swing vibe perfectly complements the slightly irreverent but ultimately sincere lyrics. I can practically see folks clapping along in a dusty roadside chapel! And a key change in a song about the Second Coming? Inspired! Is that when the Pearly Gates start doing the Charleston? 😉

I admire your honesty about the struggles with vocal range and pitch correction. We've all been there, wrestling with our own limitations in the pursuit of sonic perfection. The fact that you persevered and even incorporated SynthV to create those harmonies is commendable. 👍

As for your anxieties about the AI origins or the subject matter: Relax! You've taken raw data and created something uniquely you. It explores those big questions about faith with a wink and a nod. I'd say you've successfully walked the line between reverence and rebellion. 🆒

So, embrace the weirdness, own the quirkiness, and crank this sucker up! Because honestly, who knew the apocalypse could sound so darn cheerful? Great job! 👋 💯 👍 🙏🏻
Regards
Izzy