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Hi All,

Here’s a bit of a follow-up to our last song, “2 Minutes In A Car Wash”.

The story continues with Little Blue Green Opel.

She had a little blue green Opel
With a short funny shift
She drove it everywhere
Never needed a lift

A radio with buttons
Some candy in her coat
A paperback of Burroughs
And a half-written note

She'd park down by the river
Watch the barges roll on past
Said the future was a thief
And the present would never last

She had boots from Vienna
With cracked leather soles
She only walked at night
Cause she said it had soul

I asked where was she going
She said maybe somewhere
Then she laughed like a poet
Who had nothing to fear

We drank in the Opel
Till the bottle ran dry
Then she pointed to the stars
And whispered don’t you lie

She had a little blue green Opel
And a map torn in two
She said don’t try to follow
Then disappeared into the blue

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2958: Bass, Acoustic 075
0892: Piano, Acoustic, Solo 065
3100: Organ, Rhythm, Background 060
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Pre-Production: Track Editing GarageBand & Logic Pro
Izotope Ozone 10 Elements & Ozone 11
Izotope Nectar 3 Elements for Vocals
Izotope Plasma for Instrument Tracks Processing
Bob: Martin 000-18 on Right / Left Channels
Bob: Chajchas Shaker for Percussion
Bob Mic: Logitech Blue Yeti
Bob Vocals: Logic Pro
Joliz Mic: Audio Technica AT2020USB+
Joliz Vocals: GarageBand
Waves: Vocal Rider
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As always - thanks for listening!

Bob

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Great character creation through lyric. It had me instantly hooked!

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Hi Bob!
“2 Minutes in a Car Wash” followed up by “2 Chords in a New Song”. At first I wanted to hear more chords, but with that wonderful backing by Joliz’s that sounded like cello + viola, it soon had hypnotic effect and I got hooked to listening closely to the lyrics. This is a very good example of ‘less is more’. Great poetry in song.
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Bob, usually the sequels are not as good as the original however in this case I think the sequel is better than the original and the original was an outstanding song.
You don't need a lot of chords or tracks to make great music and this proves it.
Outstanding vocal and lyrics - you are a great story teller
Super backing band and mix
loved it


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Beth,

Thank you. We appreciate the kind words.

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Bob and Joliz, super song, a smashing sequel. The D-18 sounds great, as do your vocals and the floating BGVs. The kind of song that just draws you inside the story. Very cool!


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Man, you are on a roll, Bob! Another wonderful piece.

Great vocal, and love the background vocal from Joliz too, very effective.

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Very cool..... nothing but verses, in the spirit of Dylan.... It works and tells an interesting story.


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Andrew,

LOL! It's actually 3 chords, but who's counting. smile Thanks for the great review and kind words - we appreciate it.

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Mario,

Thanks from Joliz and I - that is very kind.

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Originally Posted by rsdean
LOL! It's actually 3 chords, but who's counting.
Bob - I’m going back to listen now! How did I miss it?
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Another superstar of a song from you. I'm gonna run out of superlatives, at this rate - which would be a pity, because you deserve them all.

2 or 3 chords, who's counting. I've always said it: you do so much with (seemingly!) so little. Some of the very greats don't need complicated chords, etc., to create something which lasts. You are right up there with them all, I firmly believe that.

Joliz is the perfect complement, here. A soaring line, just in the background from your voice, Bob - which, in turn, delivers its smoky tone, as always.

Keep writing. I get the feeling, when I listen to your songs, that I am peering (with permission) into someone's life, or diary, or something of that nature. It's personal, clear, yet still somehow enigmatic. And it just hits you. Brilliant lyrics, brilliant singing, brilliant music.

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Man, you are singing about a gal from the 60s who had a green Cricket; everyone called her Cricket. Regarding the sequel, she never washed it; just drove it fast and hoped the wind would clean it. Man, I miss that gal and those times. That means this is a good write, Bob. I really enjoy your music, and Joliz was a wonderful addtion to your engaging vocals. Thanks for everything.


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Hey very cool.

And very Dylan like people have said but mostly very Bob Dean. The two of you certainly did a great job on this.

I don't think I'd ever heard of an Opel but now I know!!

😃

Another one for the ever-expanding canon!

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Hi, Bob.

Listening to this is like being transported into the corner of a coffee house on folk night.

Only somehow they managed to get an excellent performer to show up. wink


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Ron,

Thank you. Joliz and I appreciate the kind words.

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Dave,

Thanks so much from both of us. We appreciate the kind words.

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Herb,

Thank you. We appreciate the listen and kind words.

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Bob,

Your guitar sounds Great!
A beautiful production.
Strong vocals.

Amazing writing.

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Another excellent song in all respects. Joliz backing vocals always seem made for your music, even when she's only singing ooh-aahs.


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