Hello, everyone:

I HATE to "flood" the forum board with my songs, lol. However:

I played the first version of this song to my Mum. She seemed to really not like so much the background track ... I think she thought it was too weak and sparse, etc. . So, long story short: I re-did the BIAB background tracks entirely (as well as the timbre of the solo voices) ... here's the end result.

Not expecting anyone to go through the torture to listen to one more version of this song ... but, if you do want to hear it, it's here smile Thanks so much for any comments at all, thank you PG Music for the opportunity to create and display our creations here, and thanks everyone once more for your patience!

Rumi Says (v2)

LYRICS:

It's been
Many, many, many years since we last spoke
It's been
Many, many, many times my heart you broke,

I still
Think of you, every time a white rose is in bloom,
Thinking
That perhaps, at last, God will reunite us, and soon,

But Rumi says you're inside of me,
And Rumi says: why look outside of me,
See, Rumi says that we will never meet
For inside one another our hearts will beat,
Rumi says.

I thought
Many, many, many years ago I did see,
Such a
Stunning, stunning, stunning girl, outside of me

Then I
Looked, ever so oft, for you, the one I saw then ...
I let
Countless, countless songs of love flow out, from my own pen ...

But Rumi says you're inside of me,
And Rumi says: why look outside of me,
See, Rumi says that we will never meet
For inside one another our hearts will beat,
Rumi says.

I'm no mystic, nor poet, nor singer-songwriter, see,
So all I can do is pray you one day will come back to me,

Though Rumi says ...

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BAND:

Soloists: Eleanor Forte, Asterian II (Synth V Studio Pro)
Mixed in Mixcraft Pro Studio 10

****** Song Summary *************
Title: Rumi Says - 12 May 2025
File:Rumi Says v2 - 16 May 2025.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 60, Length (m:s)=4:00
No intro. 56 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 56. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Style is _TORTURE.STY (Torture Blue Jazz Wah Gtr Solo)

RealTracks in style: 533:Bass, Electric, 12-8 Crystal Sw 065
RealTracks in style: ~1244:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm JazzBalladNY Sw 060
RealTracks in style: 3757:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm RockBluesySlow128RotaryBrent Sw 060
RealTracks in style: 3761:Guitar, Electric, Soloist RockBluesySlow128WahBrent Sw 060
RealDrums in style:AmericanaSlow128^03-a:Kick Sidestick , b:Ride Snare

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