David,

This is good.
Love the write.The SUNO writes that have been put up here are typically polished babble, generic line after generic line - never actually telling a story (or having any cohesion). I don't think you can even call this a "SUNO write". You wrote it, SUNO dropped in a few words. (SUNO writes are usually the other way around). A hell of a write.
And funny.

Solid production (as always). Good mix.

Always enjoy your write ups, too.

fj