BYOBand, thank you so much for your kind comment!

The synth vocals have their limits, of course, but they enable me to write songs as I'd like to (instead of perhaps me singing, etc.!), so I'm happy enough with them.

As for the "stunning girl, outside of me" lyric, I wrote it in contrast to Rumi's statement that the "eternal lover" is always inside of us, not outside. The singer is basically saying: I agree with Rumi, but, at the same time, my lover is outside of me as much as inside of me. Hence, why I felt that "outside of me" had to be stressed smile If it didn't work, that's another matter. But that's what I was trying, at least, to do.

Thanks again for taking the time to listen, and for your feedback!

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