Andrew, very cool tune. Like the instrument choices and the breezy arrangement. Your vocal arrangement is excellent. Quite a nice little pop gem you've crafted here.

Spent many years being an impatient maker of music. At the time I had a full time+ job, a backlog of lyrics to work on and a willing vocalist. So I had to just be good enough for the vocalist to run with it. Easy-peasy! Have since slid into retirement and worked off the lyric backlog. And while the vocalist is still very willing, I've found that I enjoy working on the vocals until they're semi-presentable. It's a newish thing, but I figured I owed it to my musical growth and whoever listens.

Which is a long way of saying I quite like your vocals and am 100% confident you could tweak whatever minor imperfections you left behind. Love your stuff!


DC Ron
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Too many guitars (is that a thing?)