Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Good one Mario! The song gave me the sense that the singer was glad to see it was over, but also some sorrow over the loss as well. I couldn’t stop my foot from tapping to this one, and that tremolo rhythm guitar was great as well - when it slid from one chord to the next, it sounded like it was miserable.

For the chorus, you could swap the lyrics of the first and fourth lines so that you end on ‘So I’m drinking my weight in beer’. Just a thought.

What came first here - inspiration-wise? Did you have the lyrics first, or did the style inspire the lyrics?

Wonderful song!

Andrew D

Thanx so much Andrew. That is a great idea that makes more sense than the way I did the chorus so thanx for that. When I do a vocal the lyrics always come first, then I pick a style. The lyrics came to me all at once.

My momma didn't raise a fool. And if she did it, was one of my brothers.

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