Hi, Tom.

Ha! laugh

They're all good, but the the cheerful attitude in "Eat More Kale" cracks me up the most.

The harmonies on "The Amish" seem a bit thick. I'm guessing that you used the lead vocal to create harmonies. You should probably back the harmonies off a bit (something I have trouble doing in my own songs). As a rule, if you're creating the harmonies digitally, you should try creating them from a different, more "bland" vocal. This makes the lead vocal stand out better.

Fun listen!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?