When I opened this post it was at RayC's comment "Needs more bass..." He is one of my favorites so I expected to agree. Then I scrolled up to read your post. Uh-huh. Nice touch. Some of the best songs are written without knowing what the heck it's all about. This one shows your many talents on full, David. The bass is kinda drowning (--hey, you didn't hear that from me). Maybe because it's pounding 8th-notes on the root. This is a good song. Well written and I like the vocals a bunch.


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marty

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