David, beautiful tune! SUPER vocals, love your breathy phrases and other subtle choices. They're beyond perfect. Also love the way you took a simple progression and twisted it around the lyric for five minutes, never losing the theme but never sounding repetitive. It's musical magic.

Mostly I love your character sketch of a time and place we never knew, but now think we might.

Recently visited the Warhol museum in Pittsburgh, which is organized chronologically by floor. By far my favorite part was the Lou/Nico/Velvet Underground days. Reminded me of this tune and Bob's similarly inspired music.

Excellent stuff!

Last edited by DC Ron; 06/09/25 05:22 AM.

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