Bob, so, so nice! Loved the 3-note motif to kick off your verse lines, and the great rhyming. Love/shove is esp craftsman-like, being one of the toughest rhymes to work with. There are a couple of multi-syllable words that just roll off so smoothly. Liked everything about this, and, as was mentioned, reminded me of Toots, one of my favorite of all musicians—once got to see him at the Village Vanguard on a night that happened to be his birthday—will never forget it. Great post!


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