I’m esp drawn to melodies that are economical—fewer notes, simple but effective. That shows me a certain mastery and confidence. In this case, the first two notes in your lyric lines immediately hooked me. And the “I am here” phrase is really good. To top it off, the vocal delivery is wonderful. Only change I’d make—I didn’t like the electronic drums, I’d go with something more acoustic…but I think that’s what you were after—blending the 60s sound with a more modern touch. Anyway, excellent—thoroughly enjoyed it!!


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