It's definitely a Bob Dean type of song and I think if he covered it with Joliz backing him it would be a lot better. The repeated lines were a little annoying, which is where a backing vocalist would sort things.

Some favourite Waoist Adages:
#1: Play on the Way.
#13: Ask not for whom the flower blooms, it blooms for you.
#58: Bring consciousness to it.
#63: On the road to effortlessness, effort must be made.
#92: Be Love Now, the rest will come on its own.