Hi Beth!
Good to hear a new song posted by you. This has a good calming pace to the song - your calming vocals aided by the arpeggio harp and guitar. Did I hear the tubular bells make a cameo as well? Perfect!

Lyrically, I loved the positive and encouraging nature of the words, and the stand out was the line about expectation brings suffering - it is easy to suffer under the weight of our own expectations. Going with the flow can allow one to see the good in everything.

I found the last chorus to be hypnotically soothing - really good. The interwoven counter melody in parts added to it nicely.

My only feedback is the closing minor chord - I would have expected major - but is that a musical symbol about going with the unexpected?

Andrew D


Regards,
Andrew D
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