from one rocker to another...
OH BLINKING YES TIMES a million.
Love the high vocs...ear candy.
KICKS A**..

just an idea...to make it blinkin perfect...and others might disagree...but...
the lead intro gtr and parts sound a tad synthetic maybe ?
but dont change the groovy backing rhythm gtrs.


maybe im wrong but maybe try a different lead sound picture ?
Imho could be a massive hit...seriously....fantastic hooks.
im dancing round the blinking room...
totally cranks me up...SINCERELY...!!!

super wowser...wont be able to sleep tonight cos of this ear candy...gonna play along to it with my gtr.
huge massive kudos...its sooo special....please dont underestimate it.
i can see a whole stadium of rockers getting off on if.
its that special....should be on every blinkin rock radio station.
already listened many times...great chorus...total hookey imho.
great vocal ending...phenomenal song.
did i say i love it?..lol.
your a big talent imhoi.

imho in songwriting classes in music schools this song should be used as a lesson re writing a commercial rock song hit.

ps...just an idea in the vocal choruses if you have access to great backing female vocs...singing along with you in chorus ??
would just add that very special joie de vivre hit sauce ??.and take it over the top ??
to other listeners...listen over good head phones and rock your world.

happiness....and great respect.

om

Last edited by justanoldmuso; 06/11/25 05:42 PM.

my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)