Hi Tom!
I love the meter of the vocal phrasing in this song - a triplet feel over every two beats - it creates a non-rushed urgency - like the sounds of the city in the background, and sax supports this feel (great work Steve M). The drop into each italicised section - not sure what these are called - are they bridges or alternate verses? chorus - Anywho… - they sounded great, different, yet complemented the feel of the overall song.

Tom - your vocals are recorded close and this creates a sense of intimacy - or maybe closer, personalised proximity, which serve the lyrics well.

Overall, a most enjoyable song. Well done.

Andrew D

Last edited by Andrew Dee; 06/17/25 02:46 PM.