Andrew, super write and nicely arranged/played. Definitely has that swing thing going on, and the lyrics and wordplay are coolly retro. I'd grade your challenge performance as an A+!

Your vocals are fine for demoing the song, and I don't find them a distraction in the least. Lots of good ideas above if you're interested though.

Loved your song!


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BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
StudioCat DAW dual screen
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Too many guitars (is that a thing?)