Hi James,

You have a good song here and well sung.

My only suggestions are:
1. A soloist instrument in the piano and drum section later in the song - there are heaps in BIAB that would go a treat with this song.
2. That same soloist could do some fills in the second and subsequent verses.
3. Bass - I kept waiting for a bass in the second verse.

Good work.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com