Hi Izzy,

I really like this. The progression is interesting; I especially like the bridge (or what I guess is the bridge). The lyrics, however fictional, certainly tap into a commonly felt experience and the 'fading against my will' says a lot. It's got a nice build but I can imagine (and in fact was hoping to feel) this developing into even more of a dramatic piece with more instrumentation and harmonies. It's already a good song (good bones so to speak) but I sense a greater potential...or maybe just a different potential.