Hey Peter - good job with the vocals and guitar licks!

One of the things I like doing when listening to others’ songs on the forum is looking out for cultural artefacts. It might be a word, pronunciation, a place name etc. In your case, despite the southern country twang you have going, I noticed the word ‘crisps’ at bar 35 - 1’50”, which others would know as ‘chips’. I say this because I have to be careful about mentioning ‘thongs’ (flip flops) in my songs. 😳

Well done!
Andrew D


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Andrew D
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