Bob & Joliz,

This is an awesome song! Your delivery is mesmerizing. Your words create indelible images that make the listeners think they are right there watching the story unfold. My mind could see the lit cigarette toasting the night air as the static buzz of the streetlight droned overhead, You can take the simplest words and meld them into a masterpiece portrait simply by the way you meld them and then inflex them via your vocals.

Simply put, this is a work of superior art.

Wishing the very best for both of you.

Alan

Last edited by Al-David; 06/26/25 11:03 PM.
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