David,

I like it when someone takes the time to come up with the detail you do, when listening, so thank you smile

I agree with most of that, particularly the lack of melody in the piano section. Also, once the voice comes back, it feels hurried to me, on a new listen. Would be better if I slowed that down to half speed or something ... just those few bars. So yes ... work to be done ... or I might just bin this song altogether ... not the best I've written, all in all, I think!

The "can thelp" idea for Asterian is genius smile I couldn't find a way around that, at all. Bravo! smile

Thanks again!