Hey Bob, loved the song, esp the choice of rarely-used lyric words like "perignon", "gloam", "frumpy", "duress"--shows me a desire to expand boundaries and not settle for the easily-picked fruit.

Now, for "boisterous", "treasonous"--the emphasis is wrong..BUT, in your style, it works just fine punching that last syllable--I like it and approve!!

And the interior rhymes are great as well. Overall a great track and very enjoyable.

About "fitting" in the words in those double-time zones...I've "fixed" this by audio editing the vox and just moving the sung syllables slightly to align with the melody--I've has several projects where I just couldn't get it to sound the way I heard it in my head, and so I resorted to "nudging' the syllables thru editing.

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