Wonderful, great listen. I esp liked the "female" rhymes ( emphasis on first syllable), and the way you kind of "chopped" the 2nd line rhyme (LU-ver, not Luuuu-ver)--made it nice and crisp. I also liked the overall feel, the whispery voice and the BKG so effective, esp at the end. My only "suggestion"--I think the rhymes were so perfectly fitted, that I wanted that 2nd line in the chorus to rhyme with the first--my obsession with rhyming I guess.
Nonetheless, really enjoyed it and took it as an inspiring lesson to do better in my own work.


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