Lots to like about this! I especially liked:
The step-wise build up of the melody in the verse--so skillfully done.
The genius inspiration to repeat the "walking on water" line--you'd be tempted to make each phrase something different, but repeating it works perfectly.
The frantic pace of it is so full of positive energy, loved that
The way that the chorus led back into the verse--liked that progression.
Re the ending, I would have probably just repeated those last two bars; again, my own preference.
Really glad I tuned in!! Masterful work, both.

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