Originally Posted by firesong
Dave, Chris and Marty...Dave you are just amazing...your guitar work here is some of your best and until I hear your next one that's where I stand...Marty, transparent man...so smooth and subtle on the bass line...ever present and right on...I love Chris's voice anytime, anywhere...and Dave this song fits you well vocally...almost whispered and mysterious...loved it all guys...it has a "black magic woman" vibe.

Thanks for all of that, Dan, very much appreciated!

Originally Posted by Tano Music
Wonderful, great listen. I esp liked the "female" rhymes ( emphasis on first syllable), and the way you kind of "chopped" the 2nd line rhyme (LU-ver, not Luuuu-ver)--made it nice and crisp. I also liked the overall feel, the whispery voice and the BKG so effective, esp at the end. My only "suggestion"--I think the rhymes were so perfectly fitted, that I wanted that 2nd line in the chorus to rhyme with the first--my obsession with rhyming I guess.
Nonetheless, really enjoyed it and took it as an inspiring lesson to do better in my own work.

I needed to google female rhyme, that is a term I had never heard before wink Thanks for the listen and comments!

Dave

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