As others have mentioned, that's a great combination of synth voices. Excellent backing band. The lyrics have much to commend them and I love the melody (and harmony) in the chorus.
Unfortunately (in my opinion), the tune you have composed for the verses just doesn't have that same beautiful melodic flow I was expecting.


ProTools; Ableton Live Lite; Reaper
Focusrite Scarlett 2i2 MK4 interface
Novation Launchkey 61 Mk4 midi controller