Originally Posted by Ghostgum
As others have mentioned, that's a great combination of synth voices. Excellent backing band. The lyrics have much to commend them and I love the melody (and harmony) in the chorus.
Unfortunately (in my opinion), the tune you have composed for the verses just doesn't have that same beautiful melodic flow I was expecting.
Hi Ghostgum.

Thanks for having a listen. I appreciate your comments. For me, songwriting is a hobby. I aim to do the best I can at any one point in time but, at the end of the day, there's no escaping the fact that I still have a long way to go smile That doesn't bother me, though. I get a ton of pleasure out of BIAB. I first bought the program 19 years ago and it is just as important to me today as it was when I first got it. Honestly, it's my number one source of fun and relaxation.

All the best,
--Noel

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