Hi aSom,

I wasn't sure at first, but with each passing moment, the song pulled me in a little more and more. I liked the rhythm change half-way through and the change in chord progression towards the end. I'm unclear on whether you are singing, but if you are, you have a sweet voice.

Since your requested English fixes: lover that embraces my heart

I'm a second-language learner too. Today while teaching a Chi Gong class using the same wrong verb I'd been using for months, a native woman finally corrected me!