As you know, Ray, I'm not technically-minded. So all I can comment on is how the song sounds to my ears.

I think this is a masterpiece. It's an overused word, but it does apply here, for me at least. That quiet piano track, that voice track with such searing words sung so eerily calm ... the message is powerful, though no-one seems to be listening, sadly ... a great, great, great song, Ray. Some things need to be said, or sung - and you've created something that goes through the noise and sticks in the memory. Bravo.

No suggestions from me, I'll leave that to those that know what they're doing and saying, technically at least smile

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