David,

I read your notes first. I was exhausted. That's a lot of work.
And then the comments. They did not give a clear picture of what was to come.

Goosebumps.
Chills, Mr. Cuny.
LOVE this.

Snyder is right. This would make a Great TV theme song (from our past). The one that wins the Emmy. And then a Grammy.

LOVE the chord changes (and I'm not really a chord-changes-kinda-guy) AND the major 7ths (I am a major-7ths-kinda-guy).
The changes were Exciting. Surprising. But in No Way jarring or even unexpected - although they were unexpected. Blended one to the next is how they hit the ear. Absolutely beautiful. Thrilling, even.

The harmonies are Astounding!

The tracks are just-right. The acoustics work perfectly.

This is Great. (I never say that)

It's good that you did not include a bridge or an instrumental.
Here is some stuff you can ignore (because you need no suggestions on this): I hear a celeste/chime/bell walk-down-arpeggio during the chorus (yes, I've done that) and some fast upward-moving string arpeggios right the at the end (I wouldn't have a clue how to do that)...

WOW.
Amazing.

fj

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