Hi, Ron.

Originally Posted by DC Ron
Hi, David! This turned out really nice.
Much to my surprise - there were a lot of times during the mix when this was nothing but a hot mess. laugh

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Very breezy and bouncy, with an upbeat message. Nice job on the lyrics, think they serve the song perfectly.
Lyrics are usually a massive pain for me, so I was pleasantly surprised this time around. They went through some minor edits (mostly choosing to reinforce the "sometime dreamers" lyric), but I avoided the urge to overthink them.

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That's a delicate intertwining of the vocal melody with the harmonies, and it sounds very cool. (Not sure about that final note the lead vocal reaches for at 2:27 even after several listens. Might just be me.)
Hopefully the new ending takes care of the iffy cadence.

The nice thing about harmonies is that sometimes a good harmony can strengthen an otherwise weak melodic line.

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Great job!
Thanks! smile

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?