Hi, Beth.

Originally Posted by BYOBand
There are some really nice unexpected moments in this, especially with the vocal harmonies. But I also wonder if there may be too many, kinda fighting each other for attention.
No need to wonder - I'm sure there are! laugh

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But the chorus is very cool, the first and last phrases especially. The guitar(s) at 1:28 ... I could stand a few more bars of that.
Yes, the "America" (as in the group) break - a nice change in an over-stuffed mix.

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I look forward to hearing any revisions.
I've added a more proper ending, and fixed some issues with the vocal mix. I've also added a touch of guitar to the intro, break, and ending to help glue it together.

I'm planning on picking up Waves' new AQ later this week, and slapping it all over the tracks to see what it does. I may also do a bit more trimming on some of the instruments and a few other touches.

But I'm going to take a break from the song for a bit so I can hear with fresh ears.

Thanks for the helpful comments! smile

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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?