I don't listen to K-Pop so I'm really no expert on the genre. I couldn't tell you the difference between K-Pop and J-Pop, but I know there is a difference. I wasn't expecting it to be that laid back. I was waiting for the dance groove to kick in.

Good job on the song and production.

Just a note: if you are going to use Synth V to sing in English, choose one of the native English voices. You won't end up with a noticeable accent in the voice.

You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.