Originally Posted by jannesan
A well produced country rock song, the mix is crystal clear and the low end rocks. The vocalist sounds very nice and professional - I'd really like to hear what else she has recorded. The repeating lines in the chorus, is a clever trick to get to the "circles" theme, and makes also the chorus very catchy.

Janne


You know I really hadn't planed for the repeating lines to relate to the circle. It just kinda worked out that way. Something else that struck me as an after thought..... almost nothing in this song rhymes. Again, I realized it after the fact. I recall writing another song a year or two back that has no rhymes in it but the lyrics are compelling enough the it really didn't matter in the end.
Thanks for listening.

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