Love that sparkly intro. Very interesting sound overall. I like the "Through a dozen old harbors I ride; I drift with a fifth at my side." Did you change it because you didn't like the meaning? May I suggest "I drift with a fifth to imbibe". I like that long i vowel better than the short a in plan and hand. I know, I know. Super pick-y-une!!! It's just a more pirate-y sound. Rrrr! Eyyye!