Hi Pete!
Not my listening genre and never heard any Waylon Jennings that I know of, but this has a good feel to it and good quality. You are good at your craft. I particularly like the 'zing' - that the last two lines of the chorus bring.

Regarding lyrics, IMHO, I don't think you've got it wrong. Being outside the US affords some objectivity.
Originally Posted by PeteMcN
...Now Im a Brit so have probably got it wrong lol
I wondered if you were from US but now living in the UK - have I understood correctly? Some bread crumbs are 'dues', truck, tires, paycheck. This would account for why you are writing country songs and not those in the style of Stones/Oasis/Blur. smirk
Andrew


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