Hi Greg,

I like this version better.
I would suggest that you revisit your vocals and reduce the Lyrics in the parts that seem (to me) to be rushed.
Remember that saying - Less can be More

I like the driving beat and the gritty sound you've got going there.

Best regards
Michee


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